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[Pencilmation #12]

the best yet

animation simple and flawless
humour =genius
this made me and my little brother laugh out loud whenever there's a new pencilmation out we huddle around the pc and enjoy the show
each one is better and better
can't wait for the conclusion!
fiachra hackett

[Hotdog - Episode 1]

NIIIIIIICE

not your classic action flash
it was good 3d animation was really nice for a change usually something like this would have been executed with sticks or something dumb
but this was really good
looking forward to the next episode

[Ban lifted]

I despise clockflashes

but this surprised me and it contained no clocks and was really good
character animation and backgrounds were really good
facial expressions seemed off a little and they could be worked on
more flashes like this would be good

LotusClock responds:

Technically, the guy is a Clock. When he gets scanned, it's his Clock Character that appears on the display screen. Clock characters are pretty entertaining if you give them a chance. That little clock-face of theirs is just so cute and charming, and it's funny to watch them get into just plain stupid situations all the time.

[Sketched-Runaway Wedding]

your best yet

although a four weddings and a funeral reference coulda worked
you used more camera angles a much cleaner style and everything was flawless
genius
and wow a scroll bar for the credits classy !
sound was good too
coulda been dragged out a little longer
with more gags though
the graduate waynes world 2 gag was brilliant !
coulda had more people in the church and maybe a few GAAASPS
and a hysterical woman woulda worked good keep up the good stuff though!!
favourited

fiachra hackett

sirjeffofshort responds:

Thanks, good suggestions. Definitely things I'll keep in mind for future cartoons.

[Super Paper Robot]

creative and interesting

coool works well animation and music flowed well together
animation was good not great in some spots art was pretty good
backgrounds mighta had more details red and yellow sugar paper to make flames or something
more colour woulda worked aswell
kinda short
woulda made a sweet music vid

[XMOS]

i'ma go download

birdy nam nam now!
nice flash the weird cube things were cool n stuff

Slick-Productions responds:

Haha, thanks! The cubes were supposed to be gifts, but adding a bow I think would have kinda ruined the sleekness of it all.
I'm glad you liked it, and thanks for the review!

[Tyler the Socialist Dog]

goodish

I would rather be a socialist dog than a capitalist pig

good show sir good show sir music worked wonderfully
voice acting was okayish
the fdog needed to be cuter
and the script was lacking a bit
other than that thoroughly enjoyable
fiachra hackett

[TUNAWISH]

this was good

the cat was done in my mind perfectly for the style the genie coulda been worked up just a tad more and maybe had a slight alpha on her say 10 or 20% she seemed a lil too solid
camera angles were good

but what really let you down here was the audio
music was really needed
and sound effects weren't great either
keep it up though
and although this piece didn't really require a background it wouldn't have hurted to have one in

oh wait one more thing ^.^ the ending I was soo expecting a joke about there being no can opener or the cat not being able to open the can cos he has no opposable thumbs

anyway good work !
keep it up!

[School 13 - TongueTied]

d'aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaawwwwwwww

so sweet

......if only stuff like that happened in real life :/

[Cranky's Christmas]

was brilliant until

hadouken!
totally didn't fit the mood

Nogfish responds:

you didn't fit my mood