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[Edwin Ep02]

OOOOOH

I loves the intrigueing plot twists HEEHEE

voice acting is better ^.^ this time

the assistant needs to be developed a bit more she seems.........bland

but from what i gather she is going to be

a good few smiles in this

Kieran-s responds:

Thanks

[Sketched - Babies]

niiiice

kept me laughing the whole way through
animation was mostly tweens and lipsynched but yeah you could have tried for more camera angles or introducing characters halfway through
this kept me entertained either ways :)
keep it up

BEAT ON THE BRAT

sirjeffofshort responds:

Yeah, we are on a pretty tight production schedule (I've animated over ten of these cartoons myself in the past year) so the animation does suffer a bit, but my only hope is that will not detract from the humor. More angles and FBF animation is certainly something I'm looking to introduce given the time. Thanks for the review.

[CW: Down to earth Pt1]

COWBOY

BEBOP INSPIRED?
definately

REALLY GOOD ANIMATED VOICE ACTING NOT SPECTACULAR BUT STILL BRILLIANT
HUMOUR GOOD
STORY WELL WRITTEN AND EXECUTED
SOUND EFFECTS BRILLIANT
MUSIC REALLY FLOWED TOO

looking forward to more!! ^.^

can't wait (like seriously)

[Jerry: The End]

AMAZING

brilliant feel good ending :)
you should do a lil review like what happpened last time thing though cos i forgot I must watch them all again however good show

[hairy situation]

WOW

LOVE THE STYLE GENIUS!
umm I dunno yeah
just brilliant dark funky detailed
story was a lil meh but other than that good

UnderARock responds:

thanks, glad you liked it :)

[Digory]

confused

story is a bit lacking

*SPOILER*
why was the guy who had loads of pumpkins
stealing the poor guys pumpkin?

other than that
loved it the cuteness was brilliant I loved the scary monster guy with the hand coming out of his head well animated and stunning visual effects
music was a little to relaxing I felt there should have been chase scene music while he was chasing the guy
and at the very end when they're all being happy there should have been a lil joke or something maybe something cheesey like they fall off the pumpkin he was sitting on or some other guy robs a pumpkin

keep it up ^.^

WhiteLightning responds:

You know, I wish I had an explanation for that, but all I can say is I was under pressure to finish by the deadline, and so overlooked a couple of things. I guess he just saw the fully carved Jack-O-Lantern and was like "oooh" and just grabbed it.

[CROW]

ATMOSPHERIC

brilliant although animation was simple swf's animated in after effects?
music was good reminds me of walking home in the dark you begin to see and hear things in the shadows O.O

scary
keep it up

Jimtopia responds:

Actually it was all animated in Flash except for my Jimtopia splash screen and the CROW title screen.

[LazyMuffin Gets Drafted]

I'm gonna miss lazy muffin :(

good tribute
style was good and anything with the breakfast song is awesome (y)
some of the close up shots looked a bit bad quality
I loved the rambo-ey bit

Graeme responds:

I tried to emulate Yotam's style. And I learned that that is an extremely difficult thing to do!!
It comes so naturally to him, that with anyone else it looks forced!

[Our House [Colikas]]

MADNESS?

animation was...................okayish (thats a lie)
I'm pretty sure this is the madness version (the original better version)
pretty neat tbh
some of the pictures were good needed more detail
style needs development
for a music video it could actually be good
cuts short however and yeah
3 stars says it all
keep trying !

colikas responds:

hey, thanks

[Short: Old Lady]

goood

this is more of an animatic though
but genius none the less
full marks
music good
style good
i felt when she said orphans and the orphans popped up there should have been a visual gag like the orphans picking pockets or something.....
dunno