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[Cat Vader]

FUNNIEST FLASH IN AGES

HAD ME LAUGHING OUT LOUD!!
it's rarely a flash can achieve this but this however was brilliant!!
cat animation near perfect backgrounds not quite as good but yet pretty good
voice acting was good for the cat however the same heavy breathing loop sort of ruined bits of it as it kept going even when he was talking
however i'm just nitpicking
reminds me of simons cat (youtube it if you haven't seen although i suspect you have :) ) somewhat

keep it up
fiachra

koit responds:

Actually yes, Claire showed me a couple of those simons cat things whilst I was busy doing the animation. She likes cats.

Glad you liked it.

[Santa's Tree]

good

reminds me of a donald duck cartoon with chip n dale good ^.^
except for the animation and drawings of the humans was a bit .....not good (at least in comparison to the squirrel which i thought was awesome) you should work on character sketches before hand perhaps if you don't already music and audio worked well with this piece could have had a bit of humour perhaps
the only other thing is
*spoiler*
I'm almost 100% certain that fir tree's cannot grow from acorns however it was santa's magic so i think it's okay ;)
keep em coming
fiachra

Sonucais responds:

Never seen that cartoon but this review is good :)

[Dirty Obsession]

HAHA

@ MatchboxDan
didn't see any real gary larson inspired work here IMO

good flash (was it done in toon boom?) voices were good and it was a little gross and disturbing
the punchline of the girl falling out of the clsoet was good!
animation was flawless
the backgrounds were really good
love all of your flashes keep up the good work

[Polar Ice Hat]

good

frame by frame animation was really good
my least favourite part was when he hits the in case of emergency and his eyes sor t of stay back ..that wasn't great the timing was just off
other than that flawless animation
keep it up !

[Gunny Bears]

TASTY!

haha
good stop motion especially liked the voice squeaky things
you shoulda had more confections in there
like liqourice laces gobstoppers chewing gum candyfloss skittles and such

it was a little crazy and hard to tell what was going on at pointsmaybe you could have had some close ups on faces and different camera angles and such
good work however
loved the gunfire!
keep it up

[Follow Your Dreams]

nice

smooth enough animation needs a tad more detail a few more jokes more sound fx
maybe try using the brush tool aswell or varying thicknesses with the lines
i gave you most of the points for use of the breeders!

[Pass The Ball]

niiiiiiiiice

the 9 is for the extra animations well funny!

I'm not going to write a long review I love your animations and alot of your ideas are brilliant
what i've noticed everytime though is your character animation isn't brilliant
the faces are always kinda roughly drawen and the same overused "anime" style I have no problems with anime style as long as it's executed brilliantly I think you just need to put maybe an extra 10 or 20 mins into each character perhaps
keep it up looking forward to seeing your next flash
wait i kinda wrote a long review ...... oh well ^.^
fiachra

[Tir Na Nog : Episode 1]

mmm pretty good

I'm not a fan of sprites
I hadn't realised that the tale of Tír (there's a fada over the i like so í) na nÓg
was known of outside of Ireland
well animated but it was mostly sprites...and sound was pretty good
perhaps when the text comes up maybe use some beeping or something i dunno
it was very slow paced and it didn't really keep my attention
I didn't really understand what was going on either
maybe a backstory should have been provided or something for people who don't really know what maplestory is ......

there was a majestic white horse in the story of tír na nóg
maybe you should incorporate that into it would be kinda cool

keep it up you need to optimize your sounds and your jpeg quality to keep the filesize low other than that now faults!