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[Squeak]

I Love

I love when people combine flash and video it's genius you know it's like gah awesome
I LOVE AFTER EFFECTS
animation was good
sound effects needed more volume
the camera angle was a little too close on the hand sometimes I felt it was crowding the screen a little and maybe you could have done some panning and more angles....would have added to it perhaps

gene-goldstein responds:

Thanks for the critique! :)

[00-Suited]

YOUNG GRASSHOPPER!

that joke alone made this flash genius
oh and then the "I have you tied up"
brilliance reminds me however of a cartoon series on the telly (the secret show) it's on bbc and nicktoons and stuff
which is a good thing can't wait for another one
humour is perfect for the style
keep it up

[CatFat Episode 2]

CATFAT!

awesome!
I loved it's humour the whole concept of m.r.think sneaking into catfats house just to tidy up also I like the turtle dude

definately should have the turtle dude as a recurring joke kinda thing!

robin should be more ......interesting or something he seemed a bit lame
like why was m.r. thin interested infatuated with him if he's such a yawn?
other than that the characters were well developed

I think m.r. thin should be the main character yet keep the title as cat fat it's cool that way

perhaps work on your flash technique and style to clean up the graphics a little
the voice acting really made the flash although the quality was lacking a little it was still really good

can't wait for the next one keep up the good work

CatFat responds:

hehe thanks!
i think i will make the turtle a recurring joke, sounds good! ;)
I'm glad you liked the concept!
Robin was the newest character i've written so, yeah his personality isn't quite as developed as the rest, i agree, i'll see what i can do to maybe spice him up a bit!
as for the visuals, they can always be improved! :D
thanks very much for taking the time to review!

[Pencilmation #8]

BEST ONE YET!

BRILLIANCE !
best pencilmation yet
story was brilliant
sound was excellent!
humour was flawless
you should make it maybe a little longer !

[No Laughing]

Genius

excellent claymation
humour was flawless
reminded me somewhat of the old prometheus and bob cartoons
there was only one thing that didn't really sit right with me was the ending it sort of just ended abruptly there should have been a punchline like where we see the hyena crying or something other than that 3 thumbs up!

aniforce responds:

Thank you, I think We've got a little inspiration from prometheus and bob indeed. And yes, a good punch line would be better. Story is not completely solid. Thanks for pointing it out!

[Fly VS Bee]

Brilliant

bee's are fuzzier
but people have already mentioned this
so I'll bee quiet now
animation was pretty good voice acting was good
it was lacking a punchline kinda y'know but anyway s'cool
ramble ramble ramble

ZILLIS responds:

Definitely lacked a real punchline.
Thanks for the score!

[The Carbonwater Show ep.5]

GOOD!

needs a more leesss random storyline as much as I love the random shizz and all a more story based animation would be cooler
I hate computer generated voices etc.
so I was glad when you fixed it with some sweeeeeeeeeet asss voice acting
animation was good (y) well timed humour was quirky and good I liked the whole citrus guy (coconut was a good idea I lolled at that) and nose guy bit
keep it up and work on story

Carbonwater responds:

I didn't really think it was all that random.

[Liquid Courage]

yayyyy!

"why are you always such a bitch"
short sweet and full of stout (guiness?) nice!

De-Line responds:

i normally like my beer tall and bitter and full of stout, but its all good really.
and yes, Guinness :)

[Day Dreamer Dan]

GENIUS

"why did you do that?"
"BECAUSE I'M AN ANGRY CLOUD"
"why are you angry?"
"BECAUSE I NEED TO PEE"
"then rain"

hahahaha
nice maybe add some light colours like a a wash
music flowed well
perhaps better voice acting
I liked it really reminded me of some of the shorts that were on tv when I was a kid

[Relax and Smile]

BRILLIANT

I loved it the flow and tone of the piece went seamlessly with the music
the quality is lacking slightly not the animation quality but the video quality this wasn't made in flash?
also a preloader is really needed other than that
kudos to you
lookin forward to seeing more

crazydave001 responds:

nope, no flash. This was done entirely in blender, then I used a video to flash converter just so i could share it with everyone here ;) . I really think I need to try a few other converters... I'm not a fan of the one I used for this.