flunkedy's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Sky Dancers]

Hmmmm

I don't quite understand what concept you're trying to explore here
as a piece of ort I have to view this very objectifiely
bleh 9/10
cos of the amazing smoke effects!

DillonBrannick responds:

Ha Ha very funny

[Detective Jacob Fischer]

goood-ish

humour was good
a bit slow paced tbh
drawings were pretty okay
needs a bit more colour ............or less white if it's trying to be black and white

butttt
needs lip synching (although i enjoyed that joke too)

sound effects not great......

voice acting was pretty okay i guess

work on backgrounds
cleaning up the graphics
more animation like drawing each frame
sound effects and your story was good but you shouldn't have made him tell us about the wife at the start we should've had to deduce that or something
clean up the presentation too .....
other than that I enjoyed it
keep it up
fiachra hackett

UNADON responds:

thank you, lots of great feedback.

[G.I.N.A]

I liked it

animation was really really good
but in some spots like the pouring of wine for instance it didn't have enough detail
music and sound effects were a little hectic
could of done with a starwarsy intro you know like a backstory rather than going straight into it
there could have been some diologue aswell would have helped develop the character rather than just boobs with a gun y'know
loved the characters
my favourite bit was the blood splatting on her face
keep it up looking forward to seeing more!

[A Friend Indeed]

reminds me of

on the moon I dunno i guess it's the big towery thing and it being on a planet

[One Morning]

Hurrah for tweens!

the animation however smooth altoghether didn't look great
story line was okay
sound was pretty good .
there's plenty to work on and if you work hard enough you can get that daily 8th to a daily 1st or 2nd
so keep it up

Matija27 responds:

Yeah, there is almost no frame by frame animation, only tweens, but next time I will experiment more with the animation technique, and hopefully it will look better.

Thank you for a constructive review :)