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BRILLIANT

LIKED
SHARP GRAPHICS AND STYLE
ANIMATION WAS QUICK
TO THE POINT
MUSIC FLOWED WITH IT
BRIGHT COLOURS
PLOT

disliked
pooey ending
no real conclusion
lack of sound fx (this was okay because it was sort of made up for by the music)
too short

no real bad points make a sequel and I'll be happy I want to find out what happens in the canyon is there another fight maybe it'll be more slow paced.....maybe they fly to europe! ooooh the possibilities are endless
loved the concept of Las Cool
keep it up

MrScriblam responds:

im not making a sequel ok fuck you

hehehehehe

I don't keep a pen and pad by my bedside...

shit I actually do! fuck!

but anyway yeah this was good , brilliant concept!
could have been executed a bit better but since you only spent a day on it thats good
keep it up if you make all 100 you'll have learnt alot from it
:)

Painted-Gorilla responds:

thanks i hope ill someday will if i wont get tired of making these shorts :D
wich i hope i wont :D

mmm

your irish influences clearly show in this flash

meh on the flash though

and I agree on the madness day opinion
oh wells it's kinda cool i guess I just hate the lil + for a face thats all that really pisses me off
yeah umm put some more effort in kids

VioletVulpine responds:

YAY :D
Also, say no to drugs.

Hmmmm

I don't quite understand what concept you're trying to explore here
as a piece of ort I have to view this very objectifiely
bleh 9/10
cos of the amazing smoke effects!

DillonBrannick responds:

Ha Ha very funny

goood-ish

humour was good
a bit slow paced tbh
drawings were pretty okay
needs a bit more colour ............or less white if it's trying to be black and white

butttt
needs lip synching (although i enjoyed that joke too)

sound effects not great......

voice acting was pretty okay i guess

work on backgrounds
cleaning up the graphics
more animation like drawing each frame
sound effects and your story was good but you shouldn't have made him tell us about the wife at the start we should've had to deduce that or something
clean up the presentation too .....
other than that I enjoyed it
keep it up
fiachra hackett

UNADON responds:

thank you, lots of great feedback.

maybe some backgrounds

other than that now qualms about the animation
sound effects prrrrrrrrrhaps.
and urr ahh
.......yeah other than that coolsies
part b?

I liked it

animation was really really good
but in some spots like the pouring of wine for instance it didn't have enough detail
music and sound effects were a little hectic
could of done with a starwarsy intro you know like a backstory rather than going straight into it
there could have been some diologue aswell would have helped develop the character rather than just boobs with a gun y'know
loved the characters
my favourite bit was the blood splatting on her face
keep it up looking forward to seeing more!

reminds me of

on the moon I dunno i guess it's the big towery thing and it being on a planet

lolled

your cartoons where you rant about stuff always remind me of my friend william
lol keep it up tis good aye

Hurrah for tweens!

the animation however smooth altoghether didn't look great
story line was okay
sound was pretty good .
there's plenty to work on and if you work hard enough you can get that daily 8th to a daily 1st or 2nd
so keep it up

Matija27 responds:

Yeah, there is almost no frame by frame animation, only tweens, but next time I will experiment more with the animation technique, and hopefully it will look better.

Thank you for a constructive review :)

I LIKE CARTOOONSS!!!

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