flunkedy's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Cock Rockets in Australia]

HA POLITICAL

nice message lame cartoon
song is okay
hopefully that whole internet censorship dealio doesn't go through in australia

Sidorio responds:

JARATE

["EXTINCT"]

Beautiful piece

animation was beautiful
the use of various media really worked the 3d objects moved fluidly with the flash objects
the music worked perfectly with it! ^.^
you have wonderful talent however you need to develop your story more
i liked the whole chasing the butterfly thing
however I didn't really understand the piece at the end
I can see alot of work went into this keep it up !
flunkedy!

(p.s. thank you for the special thanks!!)

manuelberja responds:

i will edit this,
resolution and some text,
(grammar)

thanks!

[Alphabetical Dangers]

GOOD!

unexpected and made me laugh
sound fx was good
I had to strain to hear the voice though so not good....
animation was just well lip syncing
use expressions more eyes play a big part when thinking
and various expressions

art was okayish....
good idea!

DillonBrannick responds:

Cheers

[Kitesurfer]

gooodish

needs a background yeah
needs to be longer
character is very...blobby
kitelines need to be drawn in
needs maybe a quickchoon from the audio portal
and maybe a little joke
should have left the video in perhaps for the bg or something

DillonBrannick responds:

yeah cheers for the advice I might see how it looks with the video as the bg and re-upload it.

[Shonen Vs Capcom!]

A NERDS FANTASY

woulda been cooler if it had been done in the style of the shonen comics rather than sprites I'm not a fan of sprites tbh but as sprites go this was pretty epic
backgrounds aren't great
and could have used more variation and stuff
rather than wham fight fight bang zap
Ramen joke was nice at the end

CrimsonSubz responds:

Haha yeah once i get more used to flash i will try to draw them instead of using sprites ^_^ Thanks for the comment :D

[Sky Dancers 2]

Good

this is pretty good for an action film surprisingly the music kinda flowed with it
however needed more sound effects and the character detail wasn't great shadows and backgrounds were good fast paced and kept the viewer interested
is what really makes this worth watching

DillonBrannick responds:

Thanks for the complaments and I agree completly about the character detail.

[Ban lifted]

I despise clockflashes

but this surprised me and it contained no clocks and was really good
character animation and backgrounds were really good
facial expressions seemed off a little and they could be worked on
more flashes like this would be good

LotusClock responds:

Technically, the guy is a Clock. When he gets scanned, it's his Clock Character that appears on the display screen. Clock characters are pretty entertaining if you give them a chance. That little clock-face of theirs is just so cute and charming, and it's funny to watch them get into just plain stupid situations all the time.

[Sketched-Runaway Wedding]

your best yet

although a four weddings and a funeral reference coulda worked
you used more camera angles a much cleaner style and everything was flawless
genius
and wow a scroll bar for the credits classy !
sound was good too
coulda been dragged out a little longer
with more gags though
the graduate waynes world 2 gag was brilliant !
coulda had more people in the church and maybe a few GAAASPS
and a hysterical woman woulda worked good keep up the good stuff though!!
favourited

fiachra hackett

sirjeffofshort responds:

Thanks, good suggestions. Definitely things I'll keep in mind for future cartoons.

[XMOS]

i'ma go download

birdy nam nam now!
nice flash the weird cube things were cool n stuff

Slick-Productions responds:

Haha, thanks! The cubes were supposed to be gifts, but adding a bow I think would have kinda ruined the sleekness of it all.
I'm glad you liked it, and thanks for the review!

[Cranky's Christmas]

was brilliant until

hadouken!
totally didn't fit the mood

Nogfish responds:

you didn't fit my mood