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[Sky Dancers]

Hmmmm

I don't quite understand what concept you're trying to explore here
as a piece of ort I have to view this very objectifiely
bleh 9/10
cos of the amazing smoke effects!

DillonBrannick responds:

Ha Ha very funny

[Detective Jacob Fischer]

goood-ish

humour was good
a bit slow paced tbh
drawings were pretty okay
needs a bit more colour ............or less white if it's trying to be black and white

butttt
needs lip synching (although i enjoyed that joke too)

sound effects not great......

voice acting was pretty okay i guess

work on backgrounds
cleaning up the graphics
more animation like drawing each frame
sound effects and your story was good but you shouldn't have made him tell us about the wife at the start we should've had to deduce that or something
clean up the presentation too .....
other than that I enjoyed it
keep it up
fiachra hackett

UNADON responds:

thank you, lots of great feedback.

[One Morning]

Hurrah for tweens!

the animation however smooth altoghether didn't look great
story line was okay
sound was pretty good .
there's plenty to work on and if you work hard enough you can get that daily 8th to a daily 1st or 2nd
so keep it up

Matija27 responds:

Yeah, there is almost no frame by frame animation, only tweens, but next time I will experiment more with the animation technique, and hopefully it will look better.

Thank you for a constructive review :)

[Squeak]

I Love

I love when people combine flash and video it's genius you know it's like gah awesome
I LOVE AFTER EFFECTS
animation was good
sound effects needed more volume
the camera angle was a little too close on the hand sometimes I felt it was crowding the screen a little and maybe you could have done some panning and more angles....would have added to it perhaps

gene-goldstein responds:

Thanks for the critique! :)

[CatFat Episode 2]

CATFAT!

awesome!
I loved it's humour the whole concept of m.r.think sneaking into catfats house just to tidy up also I like the turtle dude

definately should have the turtle dude as a recurring joke kinda thing!

robin should be more ......interesting or something he seemed a bit lame
like why was m.r. thin interested infatuated with him if he's such a yawn?
other than that the characters were well developed

I think m.r. thin should be the main character yet keep the title as cat fat it's cool that way

perhaps work on your flash technique and style to clean up the graphics a little
the voice acting really made the flash although the quality was lacking a little it was still really good

can't wait for the next one keep up the good work

CatFat responds:

hehe thanks!
i think i will make the turtle a recurring joke, sounds good! ;)
I'm glad you liked the concept!
Robin was the newest character i've written so, yeah his personality isn't quite as developed as the rest, i agree, i'll see what i can do to maybe spice him up a bit!
as for the visuals, they can always be improved! :D
thanks very much for taking the time to review!

[No Laughing]

Genius

excellent claymation
humour was flawless
reminded me somewhat of the old prometheus and bob cartoons
there was only one thing that didn't really sit right with me was the ending it sort of just ended abruptly there should have been a punchline like where we see the hyena crying or something other than that 3 thumbs up!

aniforce responds:

Thank you, I think We've got a little inspiration from prometheus and bob indeed. And yes, a good punch line would be better. Story is not completely solid. Thanks for pointing it out!