flunkedy's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Twisted Christmas Tales 1]

good

but i can see why you and where you may not be happy with it
humour was good music and audio were good your sharp style of graphics was good however sloppy brushwork and use of "google images" brought it down alot in my books.
keep it up!!

ClockworkPixel responds:

thanks for the review sloppy brush work was due to my graphics tablet breaking and the google images is because i don't know any other images hosting but any way glad you injoyed it and i can work on the bad parts for 2010

[Jet Vs Keisha]

LOVED IT

I loved it even without the lack of bg's it was good
you should storyboard beforehand perhaps
really good style!
maybe some sound fx
and definately more character detail some angles were lacking
keep it up !!

TaraGraphika responds:

I did do a storyboard...I'll do a better one and Backgrounds for my third Flash. Yes, SFX are going to be in my third Flash. I'll get the Character detail as clear as possible next time. Thanks!=)

[Odd and Random]

TERRIBLE

TERRIBLY GOOD!
try using the line tool and have more happening rather than just shapes and stuff
good song

DillonBrannick responds:

woo!

[magical-zorse adventure]

sweeeeeeeet

ZORSE ZORSE ZORSE
rhymes with norse
and morse and
horse
of course
but not zebra
YEAHHH SHOUT IT FROM THE ROOFTOPS TURTLECO!

ehh yeah cool flash man the lack of interesting story and stuff made me give it a 4
kep eit oop

turtleco responds:

zebra.... zorse...magical....rooftop.... kep...

[Cat Vader]

FUNNIEST FLASH IN AGES

HAD ME LAUGHING OUT LOUD!!
it's rarely a flash can achieve this but this however was brilliant!!
cat animation near perfect backgrounds not quite as good but yet pretty good
voice acting was good for the cat however the same heavy breathing loop sort of ruined bits of it as it kept going even when he was talking
however i'm just nitpicking
reminds me of simons cat (youtube it if you haven't seen although i suspect you have :) ) somewhat

keep it up
fiachra

koit responds:

Actually yes, Claire showed me a couple of those simons cat things whilst I was busy doing the animation. She likes cats.

Glad you liked it.

[Santa's Tree]

good

reminds me of a donald duck cartoon with chip n dale good ^.^
except for the animation and drawings of the humans was a bit .....not good (at least in comparison to the squirrel which i thought was awesome) you should work on character sketches before hand perhaps if you don't already music and audio worked well with this piece could have had a bit of humour perhaps
the only other thing is
*spoiler*
I'm almost 100% certain that fir tree's cannot grow from acorns however it was santa's magic so i think it's okay ;)
keep em coming
fiachra

Sonucais responds:

Never seen that cartoon but this review is good :)

[Missing Heart Short Story]

^.^

d'awwwwwwwwww so sweeeeeet maybe a lil more attention to detail in the backgrounds and stuff but brilliance song worked with it kinda
there was definately something lacking though
keep it up
fia

Syringes responds:

I think the ending lacked somewhat of a better longer ending and the dude should have found the heart on the ground not sure i had a lot of ideas in my head wasnt sure how to animate it all out together os I changed some things : P

Thanks ^^

[Edwin Ep02]

OOOOOH

I loves the intrigueing plot twists HEEHEE

voice acting is better ^.^ this time

the assistant needs to be developed a bit more she seems.........bland

but from what i gather she is going to be

a good few smiles in this

Kieran-s responds:

Thanks

[Sketched - Babies]

niiiice

kept me laughing the whole way through
animation was mostly tweens and lipsynched but yeah you could have tried for more camera angles or introducing characters halfway through
this kept me entertained either ways :)
keep it up

BEAT ON THE BRAT

sirjeffofshort responds:

Yeah, we are on a pretty tight production schedule (I've animated over ten of these cartoons myself in the past year) so the animation does suffer a bit, but my only hope is that will not detract from the humor. More angles and FBF animation is certainly something I'm looking to introduce given the time. Thanks for the review.

[hairy situation]

WOW

LOVE THE STYLE GENIUS!
umm I dunno yeah
just brilliant dark funky detailed
story was a lil meh but other than that good

UnderARock responds:

thanks, glad you liked it :)