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[The Carbonwater Show ep.5]

GOOD!

needs a more leesss random storyline as much as I love the random shizz and all a more story based animation would be cooler
I hate computer generated voices etc.
so I was glad when you fixed it with some sweeeeeeeeeet asss voice acting
animation was good (y) well timed humour was quirky and good I liked the whole citrus guy (coconut was a good idea I lolled at that) and nose guy bit
keep it up and work on story

Carbonwater responds:

I didn't really think it was all that random.

[Relax and Smile]

BRILLIANT

I loved it the flow and tone of the piece went seamlessly with the music
the quality is lacking slightly not the animation quality but the video quality this wasn't made in flash?
also a preloader is really needed other than that
kudos to you
lookin forward to seeing more

crazydave001 responds:

nope, no flash. This was done entirely in blender, then I used a video to flash converter just so i could share it with everyone here ;) . I really think I need to try a few other converters... I'm not a fan of the one I used for this.

[L4D Short: Starring Louis]

really cool

but WHY PUT SUCH DETAIL IN IF YOU'RE GOING TO DO STICKMEN! ? ^o)
I can never get my head around stickmen films they're fun to do in an hour or 2 but why bother put soo much detail into it?
other than that was pretty cool and made no sense if you'd never played L4D?
yeah

StealthBeast responds:

Yeah well.. NG is friggin stuffed to the top with Steam gamers, and almost every review thus far was a L4D player lol

I dunno why I put so much detail... But then again, so what? Look at Joe Zombie, Look at Castle.. You can make great animations with sticks.

[Vete a la Versh 7]

Hilarious

I love your humour style and the animation is really cool still needs to be worked on a little bit to be made a slightly more fluid and solid
also the music is good but it could be improved

Darkar responds:

Thanks! :)

[Facebook Twitter]

there should have been an easter egg

where you click on his tie and he impales himself
or something

JohnnyUtah responds:

maybe ill add that

[Homework Dash]

Awesome sauce

-good story simple no frills
-sound worked well with it
-good gags loved the bouncy castle
-lots of cool camera angles
maybe use the brush tool or else set your line tool to a thicker point
and use less or subtler gradients gradients make stuff look tacky generally
but other than that AWESOME! :)
keep it up look forward to seeing more

Kreid responds:

Thanks :D
Great review with the good and bad points, and I rarely use gradial fills now it was just for the lighting effects or when I'm in a rush. And you will see more films soon ;)

[Those Taxing Taxes]

Pretty awesome

voice acting 8
animation 6
story 8
it's good really good
should've went on for longer like maybe the monkey goes out of the room
and then then green guy and the platypus are just sitting there and it's all "he's not coming back is he?" ............"thats it I'm checking his cards" :P something along those lines ^ I have a feeling I took that from something though

JKR responds:

That sounds familiar to me too, but it's hilarious regardless. :)
I know people keep asking for them to be longer, but it takes so long to make them as it is! I'll try to make future ones go further along. Thanks for taking the time to leave a review.

[Behind the WaterCooler-1]

HMMMMMMMMM I think I liked it (y)

I think I get what Joe The toucan is referring to
although the story and concept are entirely different
the voices and humour are quite similiar to edsworld
graphics I give 3/5 not really good not really bad or maybe I just don't like your style
lip syncing could have been better in patches 4/5
voice acting was actually really well done 5/5
story line was good although you needed to introduce the characters a little more at first I didn't get the point of their names until after the joke about him calling him the wrong name
I like the cutting off of the "SWEAR WORDS" that makes it suitable for all audiences so a 7 year old can laugh at it and get it
you should have thrown more gags in fluffed it up a bit
one thing though was the background noise it was a bit tooo high if you understand what I'm saying a background noise is necessary to give it atmosphere but this kind of made it feel a little forced

Keep up the good work and improve a little and I look forward to seeing more of these flashes !

WaterCooler responds:

Nice review! and thanks

[Science is Phun 1]

hmmm funny concept

i liked it
hopefully it's alot cleaner next time you should put in a bit more suspense like he's about to sneeze ah ah ah but then he stops and it's like phew and then maybe you should just have his head explode and leave the rest of the body intact
maybe put more detail into the background
the music went with it pretty good
keep on flashin!

CyanideBreathmint responds:

They will have more suspense. And I know it's kind of hard to tell, but he bursts into a piece of popcorn at the end. The remake will have various people popping to get the point across. Thanks for the review