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[The Ignored Monster]

how about......

AMAZING! love the idea I love working between video and animation always works good ! keep up the good work!
it flowed well with the music
although the ignoring of the monster could have gone on for longer or he could have gone to further lengths to get people to notice him/her
brilliant other than that

[Behind the WaterCooler-1]

HMMMMMMMMM I think I liked it (y)

I think I get what Joe The toucan is referring to
although the story and concept are entirely different
the voices and humour are quite similiar to edsworld
graphics I give 3/5 not really good not really bad or maybe I just don't like your style
lip syncing could have been better in patches 4/5
voice acting was actually really well done 5/5
story line was good although you needed to introduce the characters a little more at first I didn't get the point of their names until after the joke about him calling him the wrong name
I like the cutting off of the "SWEAR WORDS" that makes it suitable for all audiences so a 7 year old can laugh at it and get it
you should have thrown more gags in fluffed it up a bit
one thing though was the background noise it was a bit tooo high if you understand what I'm saying a background noise is necessary to give it atmosphere but this kind of made it feel a little forced

Keep up the good work and improve a little and I look forward to seeing more of these flashes !

WaterCooler responds:

Nice review! and thanks

[Space rocket]

AWESOME

I think to fix the lag you use a .wav file instead of .mp3 file
I think
also put in a preloader too

[Grass KILLS]

good but

needs a preloader play button replay button
it's tooo fast the animation was clean and smooth but at the start you're like what was that :S and then you have to watch it a second time to realise he's eaten grass and puked which sets off a chain of events which was good!

[Zarth and Dox - 100 Grand]

I kinda have to agree with luke james

nice lp synching cute characters well laid out and presented
good for a second flash

[xoxo]

I liked it-again good concept

animation not so good
buutttt
you did this on a touch pad?
effort
you should invest in a mouse until you get a tablet
even that helps tonnes or do your drawing on paper first and scan it in to get better pictures!
keep it real!

[Science is Phun 1]

hmmm funny concept

i liked it
hopefully it's alot cleaner next time you should put in a bit more suspense like he's about to sneeze ah ah ah but then he stops and it's like phew and then maybe you should just have his head explode and leave the rest of the body intact
maybe put more detail into the background
the music went with it pretty good
keep on flashin!

CyanideBreathmint responds:

They will have more suspense. And I know it's kind of hard to tell, but he bursts into a piece of popcorn at the end. The remake will have various people popping to get the point across. Thanks for the review

[The Final Act]

I usually hate tacky 3d animation

but this was really good and funny!

[Leave Your Brain Behind]

good

IT flowed very well but you should have used the smooth button on it kinda rough which took away from it It got better half way through the ufo bit was amazing
you're thinking wtf are these squares and then you're alll like wow very clever
didn't like the music either that's why it's a 7

KidneyThief responds:

I was originally going to use different music, but this track just seemed to fit the rythm of the animation. Thanks for the review!

[The n00b Collab]

nice idea

I liked the one with the monopoly guy but it wasn't that noobish really
made me feel nostalgic