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[Spider Powers 5]

this was good

not as good as 1-4 though
I didn't laugh out loud like i did with the others the old lady jokes could have been better
the police officer should have had a flashback to something funny rather than a queef joke which mas moderately okay (it was better than the sarah jessica parker joke though)
the police officer and the old lady were a little lifeless
the new look i didn't like really i think some of the other characters from the earlier ones should have made an appearance the whole building thing was good but the back door joke? really?

[The Faun and the Nymph]

smoooth n gooooood

reallly loved it
coulda had a better story tho

[How 2 Make a Ngs Username]

LOVE

sweeeeett
I of course don't really follow this trend........... but i've always wanted a cool adjective noun name or website name like FatPie or DisgruntledLemon or CryingVeloceraptor
this was good the smoothing on the lines was abit rough but we'll let that pass ^.^
loved lazy muffins cameo! :)

[What Would You Do??]

WHAT WOULD YOU DO= EPIC

nice quick funny and wacky
animation was good enough
concept was really good ^.^
limited colour palette i'm not sure if i liked this
but it was nice and good ^.^

[King Donut! ep3]

REALLY GOOOD

a little childish
reminds me of some of the earlier weebls stuff toons simple yet good
music worked very well
script was okayish
haloween on christmas tis a bit skeleton jack non?
I liked it nonsensical full of whimsy and voice acting was quite okay
it seemed to get better as it progressed I'ma check out ep1 and 2 now!

[Lady Noir]

COLLAB

indeed the best proper collab in a while please do a sequel!
would be awesome
all the animation was really good I especially liked the greed character and some of the fight scenes were all choreographed beautifully
some of the artwork could have been improved specifically the first sequence
what really made this was the lovely flowing soundtrack
keep it up guys !

[Cirque des Enfants]

FAT GIRRAFFE!!

really like this the style reminds me of some old cartoons that used to be shown on the bbc good luck in uni!
you really have the skills
the music is brilliant too
only criticism i have is your use of the line tool
I felt a continuous solid line rather than a rough scattered line would have worked
I really liked the skeletons
however some of the backgrounds weren't brilliant
plus a play button would have been nice rather than it looping around once its done
keep it up looking forward to seeing more of your work

Spune responds:

Thanks a lot. :) Most of the things you mention was intentional, to give it a certain look, but I admit it was sort of inconsistent in quality.

But I hope I'll have lots more cartoons coming soon.

[Life In a Tank]

GOOD....however lacking

wow I loved the animation clean sweet pretty good looking
okay yeah dragged out a bit I was all like if it's dragging out this much there's gonna be an EPIC punchline.............and then it was like no punch line WHAT!
that lost you alot of marks I still really liked this for the animation and the voice acting (and the choons) but not that funny I know it was supposed to be "senseless" but it just seemed pointless instead
work on your humour and your story and plot please!
good luck with future efforts and keep it up!

Skeenee responds:

Fair comment, thanks for the constructive criticism mate!

Working on better stories as we speak.

My senseless shorts were more aimed at training my animation skills and finding a workflow I feel at ease with before strating bigger projects.

Stay tuned for the next ones:)