flunkedy's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Spider Powers 5]

this was good

not as good as 1-4 though
I didn't laugh out loud like i did with the others the old lady jokes could have been better
the police officer should have had a flashback to something funny rather than a queef joke which mas moderately okay (it was better than the sarah jessica parker joke though)
the police officer and the old lady were a little lifeless
the new look i didn't like really i think some of the other characters from the earlier ones should have made an appearance the whole building thing was good but the back door joke? really?

[The Faun and the Nymph]

smoooth n gooooood

reallly loved it
coulda had a better story tho

[How 2 Make a Ngs Username]

LOVE

sweeeeett
I of course don't really follow this trend........... but i've always wanted a cool adjective noun name or website name like FatPie or DisgruntledLemon or CryingVeloceraptor
this was good the smoothing on the lines was abit rough but we'll let that pass ^.^
loved lazy muffins cameo! :)

[What Would You Do??]

WHAT WOULD YOU DO= EPIC

nice quick funny and wacky
animation was good enough
concept was really good ^.^
limited colour palette i'm not sure if i liked this
but it was nice and good ^.^

[King Donut! ep3]

REALLY GOOOD

a little childish
reminds me of some of the earlier weebls stuff toons simple yet good
music worked very well
script was okayish
haloween on christmas tis a bit skeleton jack non?
I liked it nonsensical full of whimsy and voice acting was quite okay
it seemed to get better as it progressed I'ma check out ep1 and 2 now!

[Will You Marry Me?]

LOVED IT

i could tell you how sweet and pretty it is but i'm sure you know that already
your style first off it's grand but it definately needs development stick legs and block bodies are very common but are sweet
your backgrounds were fine I think
other than that theres not much to comment on the first scene could have been a little bit longer to show us how much this girl means to this guy so we know
good luck
and congrats on getting to the blue!

MarkyLyne responds:

Cheers, give me good luck on an award :P

[Lady Noir]

COLLAB

indeed the best proper collab in a while please do a sequel!
would be awesome
all the animation was really good I especially liked the greed character and some of the fight scenes were all choreographed beautifully
some of the artwork could have been improved specifically the first sequence
what really made this was the lovely flowing soundtrack
keep it up guys !

[Blood Sweat &Frosting Ep1]

AWESOME!!

overall nice graphics
nice plot story was good voice acting (DREAM SEQUENCE was good) awesome
i noticed you used bitmap tracing usually this does not work but this time it worked really good
I presume the humour will pickup a bit in the next "webisode"
looking forward to more!

[Cirque des Enfants]

FAT GIRRAFFE!!

really like this the style reminds me of some old cartoons that used to be shown on the bbc good luck in uni!
you really have the skills
the music is brilliant too
only criticism i have is your use of the line tool
I felt a continuous solid line rather than a rough scattered line would have worked
I really liked the skeletons
however some of the backgrounds weren't brilliant
plus a play button would have been nice rather than it looping around once its done
keep it up looking forward to seeing more of your work

Spune responds:

Thanks a lot. :) Most of the things you mention was intentional, to give it a certain look, but I admit it was sort of inconsistent in quality.

But I hope I'll have lots more cartoons coming soon.

[Life In a Tank]

GOOD....however lacking

wow I loved the animation clean sweet pretty good looking
okay yeah dragged out a bit I was all like if it's dragging out this much there's gonna be an EPIC punchline.............and then it was like no punch line WHAT!
that lost you alot of marks I still really liked this for the animation and the voice acting (and the choons) but not that funny I know it was supposed to be "senseless" but it just seemed pointless instead
work on your humour and your story and plot please!
good luck with future efforts and keep it up!

Skeenee responds:

Fair comment, thanks for the constructive criticism mate!

Working on better stories as we speak.

My senseless shorts were more aimed at training my animation skills and finding a workflow I feel at ease with before strating bigger projects.

Stay tuned for the next ones:)