flunkedy's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[John]

LOVED IT

was expecting a music video and then wham blood and stuff
shoulda put a play button so it doesn't keep looping also he should have went into more detail about the song before he played

[EVolution-pilot]

I wasn't expecting to like this

I was thinking oh another terrible sci fi flash
I didn't think much of beauty is humanity it sure looked cool but it lacked a storyline yeah
but this flipped that on it's head the story and paced (if not somewhat slow (the couch scene didn't really work for me)) the humour was good and didn't resort to being crude
my only problem with this was the animation which was a bit chunky and i didn't like the style you use ALOT of gradient and radiant fills and line tools and just simple tweens
I'd like to see some experimentation with varying weights in your lines at least if not use of the brush tool
perhaps each time period could have a different style of animation (prehistoric will be hanna barbera flintstones :P )
I look forward to seeing what you do with this series as it looks promising
flunkedy

vezanmatics responds:

but..but that's my style. and i don't have a pad.

and beauty is humanity did have a storyline, its about our history and future, which is, yes, essentially a giant convoluted story.

and ah yes, you understood the concept behind the humor :D
what i'm trying to do here is see if the NG demographic will respond well to historical and scientific satire rather than cock jokes.

[G.I.N.A part 2]

hmmmm tis good

artwork was good
a little rough in patches
animation for machines was amazing characters weren't so smooth
you need more inbetweens i think
the whole pacing of it felt like a 2000ad comic crossed with cowboy bebop
couldn't tell what was going on at all but was pretty cool
keep it up and try and define the story more

[Depri C Episode One]

Fair

The animation seems like you put in a decent amount of effort
but i really can't tell with the terrible quality
an idea would be to seperate it into two parts
and increase the quality if it's good enough people will watch both parts
the voice acting isn't brilliant and a little cheesy
my only other problems with it was the lack of a preloader or play button
good luck in reuploading this and future episodes

[Window(2010)]

PAPRIKA

animation was good
music was better I LOVE THAT FILM
it really suited the song and it was sort of had a feel of magic realism in it
i could definately see the influence here of paprika
the story was definately lacking and altogether very fast paced
whats going on trees cards apples do they symbolise something?
you should develop your stories in future maybe add a bit of humour and define your scenes a bit more
you definately need a preloader and a play button
along with perhaps a replay button keep it up!

[Crocodile]

BRUSHIN MAH TEEFS

now i know how to!
whats with the toothbrush brand?
good flash although i felt the voice acting was a tad condescending to children haven't watched sesame street in years but hopefully this gets on

aniforce responds:

The sponsor was Lactona. We had Golgate as a sponsor first, which is a bigger brand. But they bailed out at the last moment. Oh well, their loss now :)

[A Kitten in Rainbowland]

FOR SOME REASON

I LIKED IT?
the animation was terrible the audio was okayish
but i gave it a 5 for some reason it's the colours i think

[monstro]

Nice

LOVELY BACKGROUNDS LIKED THE ROLLING HILLS

the characters were weeird

saw the punchline a mile off still goodish though
keepitup

[The Falcon Lords New]

LOVED IT

you're animation style is really good except some of the backgrounds were lacking
the song was cool and good
my main criticism was lack of weight in the lines and depth to the characters
also
this is a personal style preference the use of radial or linear gradients realllly annoys me
this was really good though ! keep it up!!